Akane's Curse (R)

[Gero50]

Well here is my fan fic it is not complete as I only have 2 chapters out of 6 but I wil be writing the rest later



Akane’s Curse

Chapter 1 Akone’s Change

It was a cloudy morning in Tokyo and Ranma and Akane were walking to school.
"So Akane, where do you think the principle is, he hasn’t been at school for a few weeks", asked Ranma.
"Well he could have been fired for child abuse", replied Akane.
They both walked toward the school laughing. When they got there it was just a normal day so Ranma thought to himself.
“Maybe I should have a little fun now that the jack ass isn’t here.”
Akane put her hand on his shoulder and asked, "what is with the grin Ranma?"
"Well Akane I think before I go board out of my mind we should play a little trick on Kuno", replied Ranma.
So Ranma walked up to Kuno and asked him if he had seen the Pigtailed Girl today. Kuno Just looked up at him and said, why. Ranma jumped back a few feet and got ready to fight. Although Kuno just stud up and walked away. Later that day Ranma and Akane where eating lunch when the wall fell through on the far side of the room. And of course who comes rushing through but Shampoo. She ran over to Ranma and grabbed his hand and ran off to the Cat Cafe. Akane got mad and punched the table and it was in 12 pieces when she was done. She ran off after Shampoo and Ranma in a rage.
Ranma and Shampoo arrived at the cafe and sat down. Ranma still had a huge half of a sandwich in his mouth. Shampoo put her arms around him and looked into his eyes. He swallowed his food and asked her WHAT THE HELL SHE IS DOING! Shampoo just sat there and giggled a little still looking right into his eyes.
"So ok Shampoo, what is it this time. What do you want?", asked Ranma.
Just then the door from behind the counter opened and Shampoo’s Great Grandmother walked out with a grin.
"Hi Son-in-law", she said cheerfully.
She walked up to Ranma and started to reach for his arm. Ranma pushed her away and asked "why she was trying to grab him?"
She pulled a little bottle out of her pocket and held it up to Ranma.
Ranma leaned over and asked her, "What this is; I mean what is in here anyway?"
Shampoo’s Grandmother cleared her throat and said, "it’s what you and Shampoo need Son in law."
She started to say how the cursed springs have no real cure when Akane came bashing through the front door knocking it off its hinges. She through the other half of Ranma’s sandwich in front of him and said HERE NOW EAT THE REST OF YOUR DAMN LUNCH!!
Ranma turned around quickly and said; "sorry Akane I was going too but Shampoo dragged me here."
He was pointing at Shampoo as though she had committed a crime of some kind.
"So Ranma why did you stay here then?", Akane asked with a sneer.
Well Ranma tried to answer her but before he could she grabbed a bucket of ice cold water and through it at him. Then she ran out and went back to school.
Ranma stud up and the bucket full to the floor she was dripping wet. Ranma sat back down at the counter and put her hands on her face and tried to ponder what she did wrong this time. Shampoo’s Grandmother asked her, "Son in law is she really what you want? "
She put her arm around Ranma and said Son in law I am here for you. Ranma looked down at her chest and asked her, "Gool is there a way get me back to normal again?"
Shampoo’s Grandmother replayed yes in fact there has always been a way you just never asked me before Son in law. At first Ranma got ticked and was about to grab her and blame her for not telling her sooner but she held back and sat back down. She took a few deep breaths and turned in her chair a few times. By now Shampoo had to deal with the customers as the store was open so Ranma was alone with Shampoo’s Grandmother for the time being.
Ranma pointed to the little bottle on the counter and asked her what was inside. Shampoo’s Grandmother opened it and put it in front of her. She started her story again about the cursed springs.
She said, "Well Son in law, there really is no cure for the curse that you carry but..."
The little old woman walked to the other side of the counter where Ranma was sitting. And then she asked her, "why do you want to know".
Ranma said, "because I am sick of this boy girl thing I want to be normal again."
"Is that so?", said Shampoo’s Grandmother.
She asked him, "What will you do if you find a way to be rid of the curse? Then what will you do Son in law?"
Ranma replied I will but she stopped there because she had no answer she didn’t know. Shampoo’s Grandmother walked over to the battle and handed it to her.
She said, "If you use this your curse can be forever changed, you will be a real man again Son in law."
Ranma took it from her quickly and held it up to her eyes for a closer look. She thought to herself “if I use this I will never be a girl again and life can go back to normal.” However Ranma had been fooled by both Shampoo and her Grandmother before so she asked why are you doing this Gool, sense when do you care what I think.
Shampoo’s Grandmother said, "I have always cared what you think Son in law, that is why I am doing this for you and only you." Ranma looked at her in suspicion as though she had figured out her trick to get Shampoo married to her.
Ranma took the bottle and said "thanks Gool", then she walk on home. Shampoo walked in with a huge home cooked lunch for her but she was too late so she put it in the fridge and ran off after her.
While Shampoo’s Grandmother smiled and said, "My Son in law and her do get along well and now he will have no choice but to marry her." She walked in the dinning area laughing. Ranma was sitting in the Dojo when Akane walked in and started her training.
Ranma looked up and asked her how she was doing and smiled at her. She quickly turned around and was ready to hit him with a brick but she stopped and handed the brick to him. Ranma had already changed back into a boy as soon as he came home. Akane sat down next to him. She asked him if he was alright. He replied "Why do you care haven’t you done enough today." Akane thought to herself “I hope I didn’t make him to mad.” She turned to him and said "Sorry Ranma I didn’t mean to be like that today". Ranma looked at her for a few minutes and said nothing.
Ranma turned away from her and asked.
"If I didn’t stay a boy and a girl you know if I was cured what would you think. Would I be the same to you?", he asked. They both looked into each other’s eyes and they were closing. Ranma’s heart was beating faster and Ranma and Akane put their hands together. But as soon as they were about to kiss, Hoposi ran in crying for Ranma..!
He wasn’t looking where he was going he ran right into both of them knocking them over and the bottle out of their hands. He caught it and was looking at it closely. He asked Ranma what it was. But Ranma was pissed off by this point he tried to grab it from him but Hoposi jumped out of the way and ran off with it. Ranma stud up and ran after him swearing. Akane all alone sat there wondering what just happened. Meanwhile Ranma and Hoposi were on the roof. Hoposi just jumped up and stuck his tug out at Ranma calling him slow. Ranma tried his Chest Nuts technique and it hit Hoposi direct but he dropped the bottle and it fell through a hole in the roof and then. Both Ranma and Hoposi looked at each other and then down the whole in the roof. What they saw was like nothing they ever seen before.
The bottle had broken and spilled through the hole all over Akane, but was it really Akane or someone else. Ranma and Hoposi jumped back inside the Dojo but who was standing there in front of them? The young man looked right at them and then down at his chest and then back at them. Hoposi had done it this time. The liquid from the bottle was in fact going to turn Ranma into a real boy, 100%. It was none other than Akane who now shares in the cursed springs. Now when ever Akane gets hit with cold water she becomes a boy and turns back when she touches hot water. The male Akane ran out of the room and slammed his door and locked it. Hoposi looked around and tried to run out but Ranma got him and he was punished.
To Be Continued…

[Gero50]

Here is chapter 2 of my fan fic I hope you enjoy. Chapter 3 will be coming soon.








Akane's Curse Chapter 2 Ranma's Deadly New Technique



Ranma grabbed Happosai by the collar of his shirt and threw him against the wall. He then ran over and kicked him in the face. Blood and spit came flying out of Happosai’s mouth and he started to cry. However Ranma had seen this old man’s bag of tricks to many times to be fooled. He walked over to Happosai and just looked down on him. Ranma reached down to grab him again. He picked him up by the backside of his shirt. He held him like a yoyo on a string. He then put Happosai’s ear to his mouth and said,” I hope you enjoy your last few moments of life freak.”
Happosai then tried to break free but no good Ranma had him right where he wanted him. Happosai pleaded with Ranma to let him go but, Ranma just would not stop. It’s as though he wasn’t going to stop until he had killed Happosai for what he had done. He threw him to the whole in the roof of the dojo. Haposai screamed for his life. Part of his torn cloths fell down to the floor. Ranma then jumped up and kicked him in the butt hard. He went flying even higher as he screamed. Ranma got into stance for his chestnuts technique. Happosai flipped and got into stance for his ultimate technique the Hopo fire burst. But Ranma just stud there and defied him and the bomb as though it where nothing. Red and blue streaks of aurora began glowing around both of them. Ranma jumped up to face the attack and deal his own. Happosai was ready as well for Ranma’s attack. Happosai then reached into his bag and pulled out a canteen of ice water and threw it at Ranma!
Ranma suddenly backed off but it was too late, the water already was falling onto him. The water hit its mark and then Ranma changed just as Happosai wanted. Ranma then fell to her knees and was dripping wet. Happosai through the bomb at Ranma but Ranma jumped up and deflected it back at him. Ranma then repositioned herself for a second shot. She was now in her girl form so she was not as strong but she was still no less determined to kill Happosai and make him pay for what he had done to Akane.
Meanwhile everyone else was in the middle of dinner. Mr. Tendo was bawling his eyes out case he had though Akane had run away again. Nabiki walked over to the window and looked around and saw no sign of her. Nabiki had heard the fighting on the roof but had not said anything to her father and sister. So she went upstairs to go look for Akane herself. She got to Akane’s room and knocked on it. No one answered the door. So she turned the door knob and walked right in. She walked around and sat at Akane’s desk. She then looked at Akane’s bed and saw there was a huge lump on it under the covers. So she walked over and pulled them off. There was Akane sound asleep like nothing was even going on. She had changed back into a girl so Nabiki or her father still had no clue of what happened yet. Nabiki got a little closer and poked her with a pencil to try and wake her up.
Akane jumped out of bed and the blanket and sheets went flying to the floor and Nabiki almost got kicked in the face. She fell back into the pile of cloths and sheets and took a deep breath. She asked Akane why she was sleeping so soundly when Ranma and Happosai were killing each other. Akane then jumped up and asked "What was going on?" She had no idea.
Nabiki stood up and walked slowly to her younger sister. She started to explain what was going on, but just as she stated both Ranma and Happosai came flying through the ceiling making yet another whole. Akane tried to yell to stop the fight but, Ranma would not listen to her it’s like nothing else mattered excepted Happosai’s death at her own hands.
Akane grabbed Nabiki’s hand and ran out of the room to find her father. When she got to him she found him on the floor tears flowing from his eyes. He then saw her and was overjoyed he ran right to her and hugged her for at least five minutes. By that time she was calmed down.
Just then Ranma came running down the hall her hands were dripping with blood as she had done more than just punch in this fight. She quickly turned around to face whatever Happosai had planned. She then shouted. “ COME ON OLD FREAK LETS SHE WHAT YOU CAN DO I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR MORE THEN MY FARE SHARE OF MINUTES!” Happosai started limping down the hall his hard had a cut that was trailing blood behind him. His face was almost completely browsed black.
Mr. Tendo’s tears of sorrow turned to tears of the greatest joy ever in his day. He jumped up and down as he cheered for Ranma. Just then Ranma’s father Genma came into the room he was in his panda form because he was taking a nap. He was cranky, he had just woken up from it but, as soon as he saw his master on the ground barely putting up a fight against his own son he joined Tendo in a dance of joy. Ranma just watched as Happosai was desperately limping closer to her. She grinned and put her hands into fists. She waited for Happosai to inch his way to her. Once he did she lifted her foot and stomped it onto his head. He then spit up more blood all over the floor. Ranma picked him up by the caller of his shirt again and asked him how it feels. She stared at him with the eyes of a cold blooded murderer. This was to be expected as that is exactly what she had in mind.
Ranma wanted him to suffer a bit more before she did him in, so she grabbed onto the shirt even more. Akane and the others watched with suspense as the death match continued. None of them moved. Even the overjoyed Son and Genma were frozen where they stood. Akane put her hands into fists and though “is Ranma really going to kill grandfather Happosai?” She stepped back behind her father and Genma.
Ranma grabbed Happosai’s arm and began twisting it in the wrong direction. Happosai screamed very load, but that did not face any of them including Ranma who was less than a foot away from the noise. As she had him in a bind to say the least. She kept on bending his arm back until a load cracking noise could be heard. Ranma not only broke the bone but was starting to pull the arm right out of the socket. Happosai was in too much pain to beg or plead for his own life so he just screamed. Ranma revealed the pressure on his broken limb and went back to holding him by the collar again. Happosai spit up more blood which landed on Ranma’s shirt. Ranma looked down and said “this was my favorite shirt, like I need another reason to do this.”
She took a few steps back with him still in her hand. She then bent over just enough so that she was on her right knee. She put her right hand into a fist. But this was no ordinary fist, this a new technique she had learned. She pulled her fist feather away from Happosai like she was backing off. She put it close to her face but, no closer than an arms length away. Soon red aura began to glow around her fist. It seemed like it was hot energy very hot almost like a ball of fire that could not be put out. But this was no fire ball this was something far more deadly than a fire ball of any kind could be. Her frown turned back into a grin as she saw the energy around her hand increase in temperature and size. Granted the size of the aura was only about 4 cm around her entire fist. She felt it growing in temperature every second. Finally she felt a shock to through her hand this meant that the technique was complete and ready for use on the man who ruined her life the whole time he was living there. He was also the one who cursed Akane and Ranma was not going to allow him to get away with that.
She put her hand into a passion for punching, but she had it down like she was going to punch his back. She held him very close so his ear was right by her mouth. And then she said “This is for Akane you freak.” His eyes closed as tight as possible and he tried to brace himself, but it was no good. Ranma held him up like a broken toy and through her burning hot fist straight into his chest. The red hot aura seemed to burn away at his flesh like fire burning a house down to ashes. He could feel every cell in his body bursting and a ball of death going right through him. Her red glowing fist began to push at his back until it burst. Ranma had punched a hole right through his chest and blood came pouring out like a water fall. After she was done she pulled her hand out from the whole she made. Blood came out all over it. She was still holding onto his caller surprisingly. By this point he was not conscious. Ranma walked over to the window right past the others like they were not even there. She opened it and through him into the pond outside the Tendo House. She then just stared outside and watched as he fell under water to his death... Or at least that is what she thought.
The others were speechless and almost too afraid to move an inch. Akane began to walk to Ranma, she though “I hope that nothing is to wrong with Ranma.” She walked all the way up to her and put her hand on her shoulder. She had tears in her eyes like she was scared to be next to her. Ranma turned her head a little to see it was Akane. She reached into her pocket and pulled out a napkin. She used it to wipe the blood from her hands. Then asked if Ranma would come with her. Ranma was kind of puzzled because this is not like Akane at all. But Ranma was in no mood to question anything Akane was doing, she also was in no position to either.
Akane took Ranma’s hand and went up to her room. She closed and locked the door behind her. The others were still kind of shocked at all this. Son and Genma started walking to the window where their late master was thrown from. Both of them looked outside for a few minutes to make sure he would not still be alive somehow. Son asked Genma to go look. But Genma being his normal self just nodded, being he was still a panda and could not speak. Son’s eyes got bigger and he slapped Genma on the back of the head like a dummy slap. Seeing as he was just asked the same thing. So both of them decided to go together rather than brave it alone. Being the cowards that they were, Nabiki walked over to her father and gave him and Genma a little push. She thought to herself, “Oh man these guys can’t really be afraid now that he is dead.” She brushed some sweat of her forehead and walked back inside. Genma and Son began to walk to the pond in their back yard. They could only here the wind nothing else.
They were both trying to see if their master would pop up from the water and attack them. But no sign not even a bubble.
They walked closer to the edge of the water they seemed to be scanning every inch to make sure that nothing would pop up on them when they were not looking. Son then walked a few inches closer to the water. He looked at it with misunderstanding like it was something he had never seen before. Even though it was the pond in his backyard. Genma walked up behind him, and gave him a little nudge that meant you first, so Son went closer. But, both of them being scared of their master just stood there shaking.
Just then there was a few knocks at the door. So Son got up and went to go and see what was going on. While Genma just stood there waiting and shivering for his life. Son went to the door and answered it. And it was Shampoo and her great Grandmother Calone.
Son asked them "What is going on and why they were here so late." Calone walked in and sat down in the dining room. Shampoo answered him with a smug look on her face and fallowed her grandmother. Son thought to himself, “boy what is wrong with them.” Meanwhile Calone and Shampoo were looking outside the window in the dining room. Calone looked like something was on her mind. But she wasn’t sure if it was bad or good yet.
She turned to Shampoo and asked, “dear are you sure Ranma is the one you wish to wed?” Shampoo’s eyes grew bigger like she was surprised to even hear that coming from her own Grandmother’s mouth.
She answered, “YES Ranma is the one why would you even say that.”
“Well, cause I think he may be a different kind of guy then you think deer.”
“What do you mean great grandmother?”
“Well I think he may have killed Happosai and, I mean like killed for real.” Shampoo jumped back a few feel in shock and fell on the floor backwards.
She sat up and tears began to roll down her cheeks. “How, could Ranma kill he never kill before.” She said as the tears started coming down faster. Calone walked over to her and sat down next to her. She put her arms around Shampoo to confront her. Just then Son walked in with some plates and bowls of Ramon. He asked if they were hungry but no answer. So he walked over and set the two bowls of food on the table. It was just left overs but they were guests even if they were also technically enemies.
Calone saw the food on the table but just nodded to say thanks. Son walked back to where Genma was and didn’t find him. He saw his foot prints leading into the water but, no sign of him. So he walked to the other side of the pond and found a pile of bushes and other stuff in a wagon. He looked around and found nothing nearby and then he decided to look in the wagon. He put his hand in the wagon and started rummaging around like he was looking for something important. He felt something that was not any kind of plant he knew of. So he pulled it up and out of the twigs and other plants and it was none other than Happosai’s body. He screamed and dropped it on the ground. Some blood was coming out the whole in his chest made by Ranma.
He thought to himself, "could he have really found his master’s dead body or was this some kind of a trick." Anyway he had to dispose of it quick for both his own sake as well as Ranma’s. So he picked it up and stuffed it in his shirt and ran. He had no real idea where he was going to hide the body or the fact that there was a blood stain on his shirt. But he did know that no one could find it or him. So he continued until he was coming up to a forest. He ran in the forest with his dead master and thought “is this even legal?” At any rate he was not about to let anyone stop him.
He was determined to save his family from this evil mad man by finishing the job Ranma started. He kept running until he came to a river and a water fall. He pulled Happosai’s body out of his shirt and held it up high with his left hand. He then took one step back and through it into the river and he shouted while doing so, “THIS IS FOR MY FAMILY!”
He turned around and went back home to the dojo with a sense of accomplishment. It was like he had finally overcome the greatest demon of his life and could now be at peace. But when he got back to the dojo he still could not find Genma. So he went inside to see if he was sleeping. And sure enough there he was in his room sleeping like a baby. He was the one who dragged Hapoosai’s corps out of the water and placed it in the wagon. But Son felt much at ease now that their master was gone he felt a little tired himself and laid down in Ranma’s bed and feel a sleep next to Genma right there on the floor.

To Be Continued

[SigmaSD]

Well I've never really read nor watched the anime of Ranma but I have to say that it appears to be actiony and violent. :p It started off pretty funny and then you shifted right to the action perfectly. The only thing is minor spelling errors but its developing into quite an entertaining piece of work. *smiles*

[Gero50]

Thank you very much man I enjoyed rightin it maybe you can corect them sense you can edit posts here.